Photo Essay Revision

Yesterday I finished putting the final touches on my photo essay. I added two more pictures, which is not a lot, but I thought they were good enough to be in there. I got some good feedback last week from everyone. All the comments were very positive and I really appreciate what they had to say. I tried to take out some of the words in the captions-I hope it helps! These are the only major changes I made to the essay. I don't know what else I could do. If anyone has anysuggestions, please let me know!